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Post by Zans on Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:57 am

i did a little test with swords

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Post by KD on Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:59 am

I really liked it. The sword was awesome, the trails were awesome, and so were the movements.

That bit where it was spinning in the air didn't look quite perfect, but there you go.

GREAT WORK!
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Post by Scythe on Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:05 pm

That was nice Very Happy I really liked the boomerang effect!
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Post by mack on Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:19 pm

Gravity is a little off, and the first jump need more of a build up because he kinda just popped up there and i wasnt very pleased with the sword spinning effect but thats just me being fussy, nice work though.
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Post by fresh on Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:48 pm

really good! Very Happy and like mack said, the gravity were little off.. but the boomerang thing were awesome!
keep the good work up
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Post by Dannyplatinum13 on Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:02 pm

It was okay. The spin effect was nice, but when after he throws it the rest of the anim does not flow. Especially the last swing. The trail seemed to be inappropriate for the attack. And the attacks were a bit too sticky.

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Post by NubbyGG on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:53 am

Awesome man, although the first landing was a bit bleh, but the rest of the anim was great the boomerang thing was awesome, Good job man baby lips.
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Post by Swank on Tue Apr 28, 2009 7:22 am

The sword was awesome!

You nailed most of the movements but some looks a tad off, great job though.

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Post by Blaster on Fri May 01, 2009 3:29 am

good dude but you kneeded mor like easing like mack said but loved the sword boomerang effect Smile
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Post by BlackSpark on Fri May 01, 2009 11:47 am

that was alright dude,
but the swings needed a frame between, more easing, or just a bigger trail to show the between movement, cause it seems like he just Jumps to do it from that position.
The boomerang was nice Very Happy but i only realised what it was on the third time watching :P
Nice overall tho, but you can do alot better Smile
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