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Post by Jester on Sun Mar 08, 2009 12:53 am

Here is a short and not very good test to try out what im making in a bigger animation =3... don't expect it anytime soon

http://www.truploader.com/view/583814 :shock:
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Post by Obi Revolution on Sun Mar 08, 2009 12:12 pm

The footsteps should be smoother, they are too choppy. Also, there is a significant lack or anticipation before the jump. Then I would have put a trail on the sword slash, because it would have been smoother. The play and stop button shouldn't move like that, it should be static. And on the landing of the jump, there needs to be more anticipation because if someone jumps, they wouldn't just stop. Nice design on the sword though. It's hard to really comment though because it was so short. You should make those changes add more then post it.
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Post by Reaven on Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:58 pm

i think with a little more practise you could as good as zackie!
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