Pawn Test (Zans)
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Zans- Experienced
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Re: Pawn Test (Zans)
I really liked it. The sword was awesome, the trails were awesome, and so were the movements.
That bit where it was spinning in the air didn't look quite perfect, but there you go.
GREAT WORK!
That bit where it was spinning in the air didn't look quite perfect, but there you go.
GREAT WORK!
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Re: Pawn Test (Zans)
Gravity is a little off, and the first jump need more of a build up because he kinda just popped up there and i wasnt very pleased with the sword spinning effect but thats just me being fussy, nice work though.
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really good! and like mack said, the gravity were little off.. but the boomerang thing were awesome!
keep the good work up
keep the good work up
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It was okay. The spin effect was nice, but when after he throws it the rest of the anim does not flow. Especially the last swing. The trail seemed to be inappropriate for the attack. And the attacks were a bit too sticky.
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Awesome man, although the first landing was a bit bleh, but the rest of the anim was great the boomerang thing was awesome, Good job man .
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The sword was awesome!
You nailed most of the movements but some looks a tad off, great job though.
You nailed most of the movements but some looks a tad off, great job though.
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good dude but you kneeded mor like easing like mack said but loved the sword boomerang effect
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Re: Pawn Test (Zans)
that was alright dude,
but the swings needed a frame between, more easing, or just a bigger trail to show the between movement, cause it seems like he just Jumps to do it from that position.
The boomerang was nice but i only realised what it was on the third time watching :P
Nice overall tho, but you can do alot better
but the swings needed a frame between, more easing, or just a bigger trail to show the between movement, cause it seems like he just Jumps to do it from that position.
The boomerang was nice but i only realised what it was on the third time watching :P
Nice overall tho, but you can do alot better
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