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Post by KD Tue May 05, 2009 1:34 pm

So I have had a break from animating for 4 days, and decided to make this.

It's a bit worse than what I normally do, but I still need some C&C.

http://www.truploader.com/view/585370

(It's one of the best backgrounds I've done so far..(I suck at bg's))

-Thanks.
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Post by Scythe Tue May 05, 2009 1:51 pm

The background isnt that bad Smile But I think the stick stays a little to much in the same position, you gotta make him more ragdollish :P also after the first hit on the ground the guy goes up but a little back in 1 frame and then forward again, try to make it 1 fluid motion with no *right* *left* *right from there on* movement, but all right. If you get what I mean. I could make an example movie if you like :P
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Post by KD Tue May 05, 2009 2:15 pm

Oh yea, thanks for the crit. I can just about notice that now and will try to improve upon it in future.

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Post by Scythe Tue May 05, 2009 2:21 pm

No problem ^^ Glad I could help, your on the right way Very Happy
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Post by stund Tue May 05, 2009 5:21 pm

super mega ultra stiff
work on that
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Post by Clips Tue May 05, 2009 6:09 pm

bad physics and berry stiff
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Post by KD Wed May 06, 2009 4:44 am

Can someone tell me how to make it less stiff please?

Or point to a stiffness tutorial...
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Post by Clips Wed May 06, 2009 6:00 am

easing and movements im pretty sure
i've forgotten much though since i'm rusty
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Post by Blaster Thu May 07, 2009 4:23 am

Shocked well...
now i uderstand stiff ^^ well anyway xD

try easing the fall like after the bounce the stick like hmmmmm....
bounces xD a small period of time. what you need is more time and slowly after the bounce make the fall a little and a little faster util it hits the ground Smile

hope this helped you (i dont thinks so im bad at explaining >.<)
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